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Post by Chronos on Mon Nov 29, 2010 9:37 pm

And if Bart stole that, that would be really bad. It looks like thats what's holding his outfit together. D:

MANLY CHANGE PUUUURSE! :D

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Post by mama_sama on Mon Nov 29, 2010 9:45 pm

I think it's the front of a buckle, yes. So it would have disasterous results. It's also where Quince keeps his monocle.
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Post by Chronos on Mon Nov 29, 2010 9:49 pm

His totally pointless monocle, since he can't really read that well.

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Post by mama_sama on Mon Nov 29, 2010 9:54 pm

Well the flyer he was handed was pretty badly translated, but yeah I think he'd have a hard time with anything more difficult than "Clifford the Big Red Dog."
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Post by Chronos on Mon Nov 29, 2010 9:57 pm

Hey, that book is hard to read. If it weren't for the pictures, I never would have finished it. XD

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Post by mama_sama on Tue Nov 30, 2010 3:09 pm

I need to work "manly purse" in there somewhere. *L*
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Post by Chronos on Tue Nov 30, 2010 4:29 pm

In the next inn, mayhaps?

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Post by mama_sama on Tue Nov 30, 2010 5:20 pm

We'll see. The Comic has been pretty much mapped out for the next 4 years (or something). The only part I write now are the gaps.
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Post by Chronos on Tue Nov 30, 2010 5:28 pm

4 years? Wow. O.O

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Post by mama_sama on Tue Nov 30, 2010 6:01 pm

Probably. I already have 3 notebooks full of pencils and many notes besides.
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Post by Chronos on Tue Nov 30, 2010 6:07 pm

There's always enough room for dialog (Sp?) change, though.

Especially when adding Manly Puuuuurse--es. XD

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Post by mama_sama on Wed Dec 01, 2010 4:50 pm

That's true. A lot of ALL of the comic's dialogue is what you'd call "Last Minute Adlibbing."
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Post by IntrovertedWife on Wed Dec 01, 2010 5:15 pm

I say there need to be more high kicks, especially from Morf.
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Post by mama_sama on Wed Dec 01, 2010 6:39 pm

@wife Well, Morf is the only one in a skirt. *L*
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Post by mama_sama on Mon Dec 06, 2010 10:02 am

New comic's up on the Site, and check out Fangirl's CRIT! fan art of Kiyana and Bart!
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Post by Chronos on Mon Dec 06, 2010 4:40 pm

They're feeding a dragon a deer?

Why was the note all smudged? Is his handwriting that bad?

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Post by mama_sama on Mon Dec 06, 2010 5:04 pm

The note was written by an elderly Monk in Morfindel's Temple, so the handwriting was bad. It's smudged because Morf doesn't have pockets and kept it on his person.
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Post by Chronos on Sun Dec 12, 2010 5:53 pm

Ew, sweaty note. >.<

I woul have never guessed that Morf was such a wimp. What, are you afraid of being torn into pieces by a dragon? Wuss. XD

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Post by CptGreedle on Wed Dec 15, 2010 9:53 am

Yay Kiyana and Bart fanart! Very Happy

If you guys have not yet guessed which TA member plays which characters, perhaps we should show everyone.
I think a Donuts For Looking and Cit crossover would be hilarious, if the DFL characters cosplayed as their alter egos.
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Post by CptGreedle on Wed Dec 15, 2010 9:57 am

Oh yes, we've been playing this same D&D campaign for a while now. Steve has been a great GM, (GM, DM whateva), and we may continue to play for a while longer.
With all the content we get from the game, it will take us forever to actually cover it all.
And you guys still have more fun character to meet, although they may take a while to get to...
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Post by Chronos on Thu Dec 16, 2010 10:51 am

Woah, it's Captain Greedle!

That idea of the crossover sounds awesome, I would love to see that. XD

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Post by Rhian on Mon Feb 21, 2011 12:41 am

Hey folks! Rachael here! I do the ink, color, and lettering on CRIT!. Just popping in to let you know that the current "page" (which is kinda a guest comic page by yours truly) has a second, more obscure version. I thought our forum folks might get a kick out of it so I'm sharing it here. We had a great time at Katsucon, but the scheduled CRIT page fell too far behind what with all the convention-related work. We'll be back to our story as usual next weekend.

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